<...>Please understand my bitterness, but I simply cannot afford programme cost for around 30 thousand pounds, living in a country with one of the lowest average incomeincomes around the world. Within a year, I am planning to grow my savings up to 20 thousand pounds and take a loan up to 3 thousand pounds; a bigger loan for education programmeprogrammes is not available in Ukraine, as well as I am not eligiblemy being ineligible for credit in the UK. I could notcannot ask my single parent for help either.
Therefore, I would like to kindly ask you to pass my message to the committee with the request to review my application to elucidate why my application was rejected. This information will help me to navigate through my mistakes and to improve my scholarship application next time. I have a huge determination to study at the Bartlett School of Architecture and I
will do everything possible to achieve my goal.

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